Please Your Readers – 3 Trope Tactics

tropesI’m a genre whore. 70% of what I read is Young Adult fantasy or dystopian fiction. I’d make it 100% but I actually want to read my friends books and occasionally I like dipping my toes in other stuff like (thrillers, crime, literary fiction) and then there’s non-fiction business, marketing and mindset books and of course, my other love, conspiracies.

But the point is, I’m a big slutty slut slut when it comes to YA fantasy/dystopian. I gobble it up like a starving orphan. Why?

Because I love that shit. I love it so much I’d motorboat them books all night long and carry a caffeine drip to work because I stayed up so late reading (happens a LOT).

But, having read a lot of books in the same genre I can confidently say, they are ALL the same story. No really, they are. But its the familiarity that drags me back.

And it’s the familiarity that drags other readers back too. We actually want to be told the same story, over and over and over. It’s just that we want to be told it in a different way, so it doesn’t feel like the same story.

That’s where tropes come in. Tropes give your readers the familiarity they crave, which is why they are so important to you if you’re a genre writer.

I decided to read a lot of the YA best sellers out at the minute as I’d spent much of the summer reading non-fiction and I missed it. But also, because its important to stay in the know about what’s successful in your genre and also understand the popular tropes. I have a long list I’m trying to get through but I’ve included the books I’ve read in the last week in the post.

Image from Amazon, click here to buy

Image from Amazon, click here to buy (It’s a yes from me, 5* Review too)

But what in the name of literary Einsteinius is a Trope?

Tropes are reoccurring themes, concepts and patterns usually found buried deep inside the juicy guts of a genre.

I see lots of people confuse clichés with tropes. They are not the same. Clichés are tired, cheesey, cringe worthy yawn fests. Like the witch who cackles and has a long crooked nose with a mole.

Cliché = Bad

Tropes = Good

Tropes can, and should be used time and again. And if they’re told in novel way, you’ll have readers gagging like little inkword addicts for more of your book.


ONE – Know what the tropes are

Here’s some examples of genre tropes (soz, they are predominantly from the genres I read.)

Young Adult Tropes

  • Orphan protagonist or excessively distant parents
  • Love triangles
  • A graduating ceremony
  • Lost of emotion and specifically around a first love

Fantasy

  • The chosen one
  • The one magical sword/potion/device that will save the world and is conveniently difficult to locate
  • The mentor character that dies just before the hero is ready to spread his wings

YA Fantasy/Dystopian YA

  • An excessively strict societal system punishments often death or imprisonment
  • No touching/physical contact with opposite sex before marriage (usually some form of chosen/arranged marriage)
  • Class divides
  • A protagonist usually from lower class

Crime 

  • A dead body discovered at the start of a novel
  • A crime fighting detective dedicated to the job but a total maverick
  • A murderer either arrested or killed at the end of the book
  • Serial killers

TWO – Know How To Find The Tropes

Not that I’m trying to teach anyone to suck eggs, but it really is as simple as opening your book legs and being a big fat genre slut.

So how do you find out what the tropes are? Stick to a genre and read as many books as you can stand from it!

I promise on my bestest scouts honour that after a few books, reoccurring themes, concepts or patterns will appear.

Its like a gnawing, a sense of familiarity you can’t quite locate. An uncomfortable itch of knowing. A ‘wait a fucking minute’ moment. Yes, yes you have read this story before. SEVERAL TIMES people. Several freaking times.


THREE – Tropes and Clichés A Worked Example – Learn from the Pros

I read two books this week, after I’d decided the theme of this week’s post… And whaddyahknow, they were practically the same story, only one book I was a bit ‘meh’ over and the other I loved!

The books in question were The Red Queen by Victoria Aveyard and The Selection by Kiera Cass

Now. I had to rack my brains on this badger, because the stories are obscenely similar.

The plots in my own words:

The Red Queen is based on a blood class system – Red blood you’re fucked and a commoner, Silver and you have magic powers and are effectively royalty. The Silver Prince has to choose a Queen from all the silver royal families. The protagonist spoiler alert – (a red i.e. pauper who has the powers of a silver) gets embroiled and ultimately becomes part of the silver royal family system and chosen to be the wife of the prince she doesn’t love. All the while, a revolution is ongoing the underdog reds are uprising and want their freedom from the oppressive silvers. The protagonist is called Mare (remember this delightful name). She doesn’t want the power or the crown.

Picture from Amazon, you can buy the book here.

Picture from Amazon, you can buy the book here.

The Selection is based on a numbered caste system, Ones are royalty, eights are lowers than slaves and have nothing and surprise, surprise there is also a rebel uprising, although it’s much less of a feature than in The Red Queen. The royal prince has to choose a queen from his people i.e. a woman from one of the lower castes. The protagonist is called America (aka Mer) (yes, yes they do have the same name!). 35 girls from different states go and compete in the selection for the hand of the prince, and of course Mer is one of them. She doesn’t want the power or the crown.

They are the same story, THE SAME STORY folks.

They both stick to the genre tropes – love interests, class systems, rebellions, dystopian themes. But The Red Queen nailed it. The Selection really didn’t.

I’ve been wracking my brains as to why that is, and I suspect its the tropes. While the Selection had them, I saw the end coming from about ohhh page 2. It was predictable, misogynistic and clichéd almost, a tired story I’d read a thousand times. Don’t get me wrong, I read it in two sittings, it was like addictively shit TV, you just can’t help sitting there watching just one more episode, even though you’re about to urinate over your popcorn and remote control you’ve been sat so long. AND I’ll read the rest in the series too, so it’s not all bad.

But The Red Queen had a new take on it. It was the same story but told differently. Aveyard took the tropes and shook that shit up with different twists, a protagonist that thought differently, spoke differently and acted differently.

Tropes and clichés are a dangerously fine line to tread. Do it wrong, sprinkle too much of that knowing story familiarity and you end up with The Selection, a clichéd story we heard a thousand times. Shake it up enough, and you end up with a story that makes genre lovers squeal in ecstasy.

What genre do you write? What are the tropes you know of and do you actively adhere to them or actively avoid them? Let me know in the comments below.

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    1. HAHA! You make me laugh, well I guess now you do. I think themes might be different. Do you know the hunger games? The theme in that is sacrifice, but the tropes it uses, are a dystopian society with evil president dictator, a love triangle and in a way a ‘chosen one’ protagonist.

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  1. In The Necromancer’s Apprentice (which its first publisher characterised as YA) I definitely went with class divides, and a protagonist from the lower class. Then in the sequel, I’ve added the magical item that’s hard to locate. I don’t know if that makes me proud or sad!

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  2. I never thought about it but it is really true. The readers want to find them in a scenario they somehow can relate to. That’s how they are able to live with the story. But still, it needs to be different enough to keep them interested in exploring the story and finding a new aspect about “their own experience”.

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  3. Great examples, Sacha. Some theorists state that there are only 36 plots…total. I imagine certain plots gravitate toward specific genres, and then add in the expected tropes and it may seem like there isn’t much wiggle room. Yet, I completely agree that with a little imagination a story can feel incredibly original. 🙂

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    1. I’ve heard that, I’ve also heard it said there are only 6 plots too. Its so true, I couldn’t believe the timing too. It was only when I put the second book down that I realised I’d just read the same book twice! and yet, they were so different. Guess that’s the power of words.

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  4. Interesting… we are just looking at tropes in short stories in class this week… and metaphors, and similes, and all manner of other writing techniques with unpronounceable names… not sure its English at all! Lol! 😂

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  5. Yeah, this is definitely spot on. And, of course, you know I know of what you speak. YA is all the same, yet different. Completely addictive, too. Is Red Queen part of a trilogy or a stand-alone? (I didn’t read that part of your post – apologies – because I am about to read the Selection trilogy which I’ve been waiting to read forever.)

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    1. Oh dear. I’d skip the selection and read the Red Queen. They’re basically the same story only the Red Queen is a BILLION times better. Yes it’s a trilogy. Two are out the last one due Feb 17. Let me know what u think of the selection see if it irritates u as much as me.

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      1. Crap. I’ve been waiting… I have all three… *tears* No, I’m going to read it. I’m SURE I’ve read worse. But I’ll let you know. And I’ll definitely check out the Red Queen. I’m reading some other awesome story at the moment. 😉 But, when I get back to it, am in the middle of the Raven Cycle series. Excellent. Recommend that.

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      2. Yeah I was not impressed – you there’s 6 Selection books now?! But only 3 I think from America’s POV.

        Haven’t heard of the Raven cycle, will have a look at that, I just ordered like 13 books all first in series 😂 I’m trying to pick up all the tropes etc and understand what’s popular at the moment sighhhhh

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    1. Yes absolutely, films too! I mean you don’t HAVE to stick to tropes, it probably makes sense if you wanted a publisher as tropes sell but if you were writing literary fiction then you can bend the rules much more or just writing for yourself then who cares!

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