I woke up this morning to an email titled ‘Congratulations’, obviously it was junk. Except… I read on, just to be sure. I’ve been entering so many competitions there was just the tiniest iney weeny slither of hope that maybe, possibly, I could have won??
I did. I won a writing competition. An actual, real life writing competition. Cue my jaw hitting the floor, several re reads of the emailed followed by some extreme bouncing on the bed, jumping up and down and hooting. Yes, I was that much of a kid!
What did I win?
There is a weekly competition called less than 100 words, it’s a bargain to enter at just £0.99 per entry. You have a prompt which you must either include or write about the theme.
My prompt was to use the following as a first line:
She heard a whisper behind her.
Here’s my winning entry:
She heard a whisper behind her. It made her breath catch in her chest.
“You kept your promise,” she smiled.
Eleanor eased onto her bed rolling to the far side. His side. She padded the pillow, it made one of his grey hairs fall onto her arm. A twinge pinched her heart. She wasn’t sure if it was the loss or heart disease. Probably both.
“It’s time,” a familiar rumble drifted through the air. She couldn’t see him. But she knew. He’d promised he would come back when it was her time.
“Jim?” she smiled, and closed her eyes.
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You can see the winning entry, past winners and enter yourself here. Why not give it a go yourself 🙂
Does this mean I can call myself a writer now?! :p
You write so you are a writer. Congratulations!
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Thanks so much for the support. 🙂
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you are welcome, we can all use some support 🙂
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Congratulations 😀 It’s a wonderful story. I love the power of a sentence to get the creative juices flowing!
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Thanks Mel, I never knew how much I loved flash, but I really like the pressure it gives having to write a story in such few words 😀
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Congratulations x
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Thanks so much Sarah
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Every time you place words on a page with thought and let them play you are a writer 🙂 Congratulations, Sacha! 🙂
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Aww Sue, what a lovely way to describe being a writer… in that case I embrace it with open arms! and thank you :p x
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😀 x
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Jahla!!! Write on and may the force forever be with you! –♥E.E.
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Thanks so much 🙂 really appreciate it
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Congrats! That’s so exciting. 🙂
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Thanks Rachel 🙂 hehe. x
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Woohoo! And yes.
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Thanks you Grace 😀
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Congratulations. And YES.
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Thanks so much Kristina 🙂
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That’s amazing congratulations.
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Thank you so so much 😀
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Congrats, Sacha. Of course, I would have said you’re a winner anyway 🙂 Now you’re a winning winner! I love your entry. A whole story in under 100 words. Amazing.
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Thanks Diana 🙂 lol, and thank you for such lovely compliments 😀 ❤
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You’re certainly a writer and a published one at that. Something to be very proud of. Congratulations. On with the book.
xxx Huge Hugs xxx
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Published? I hadn’t even considered that! 😀 😀 😀 😀 yay. Thanks David. x
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Congratulations! Of course, you already were a writer. Way to go!
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thanks so much 🙂 hehe 🙂 🙂
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Congratulations and, yes, of course you’re a writer!
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Lol thanks Jan, hard to accept though!
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I think you could have called yourself a writer before, but congratulations anyway!
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Thanks Allie, one of those things thats so hard to accept though!
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Just because you have a hard time accepting it, doesn’t make it any less true 🙂
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…..point taken! lol :p
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It means you can call yourself an AUTHOR!!! Well done! Its a great story and you are a deserving winner!!! 😀
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog and commented:
CONGRATULATIONS TO SACHA – YAAAAYYYY 😀
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ahh gosh, thanks Chris ❤ still can't believe it and thank you so so much 😀
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Welcome Sacha – You didn’t think I could keep quiet about it did you? 😈😎😃😄👍
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Haha Erm, well if I’m being honest I wasn’t even sure I was going to post it, Ali made me! But thank you made the win all the more sweeter thanks to your reblog 😊
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Good for Ali – she can be very persuasive when she puts her mind to it LOL
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Congratulations! That was a brilliant story and you must be thrilled you won 🙂
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Thank you Edwina, really appreciate it, and thrilled is an understatement, I am so so ecstatic !! :p
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And deservedly so too! 🙂
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Well done! Well deserved.
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Thanks Graeme 😀 x
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Congratulations, well deserved, Sacha! Powerful 100 words. Chryssa
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Thank you so much Chryssa 😀 really really appreciate your lovely words
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What a lovely story, crafted into a 100 word capsule. No wonder it became a prized entry. Congrats, Sacha..keep going…
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Thank you Raj that means the world to me. 🙂
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❤ Congratulations! How exciting!
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Thank you so much 😀 I am bubbling with excitement. 🙂
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Well done that’s great news
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Thank you Eric 😀
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Many congratulations. Well done.
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Thank you Wendy 🙂
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Congrats! Good job!
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Thanks Patrick 🙂
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Congratulations, Sacha! I love your winning entry!
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Thank you Karin, and thank you for loving my entry thats made my day 😀
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Congratulations, Sacha! I love your entry!
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Congratulations for the win! I enjoyed reading your entry! 🙂
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Thanks so much 😀
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Really good to be able to read your winning entry. That’s WINNING ENTRY!! It’s fantastic and very well-deserved :-))
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Thanks Esther, haha, you make me giggle! ok ok, I accept I may have actually won something! 😮
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Too damn right, lol 😉
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Congratulations – what great news to get on a Monday morning! You deserved to win, packing such a powerful story into so few words.
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Thank you Annabelle, that means the world to me 😀
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Congratulations! I loved this Sacha! I got goosebumps and everything. ❤ ❤ ❤
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:O :O ok that is like an honour that you got goosebumps, I’m still struggling to believe I even won!! Thanks so much for reading it 😀 xx
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Well deserved, Sacha! You go girl!! ❤
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Pah! Are you a writer? Like I’m not the Pope, you’re a writer. You create with words. Even 100 words (actually your story is pretty neat). Well done, kiddo!! We are most pleased.
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lol lol lol you’re so funny! and thank you, means a lot coming from you 😀 ❤
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I know my tongue wanders to its cheek a bundle but that one was as serious as I get. Be out and proud. I AM A WRITER. Go on open the backdoor and bellow that at the moon!
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Aww thanks Geoffle I do feel a bit like a writer now not sure I’m quite ready to bellow but I’ll give the moon a whisper tonight..! ;p
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Congratulations! I really enjoyed your story.
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eek, thank you so much 😀
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You could have called yourself a writer so long ago! Congratulations. That’s definitely award-winning writing, MS. WRITER!
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lol thanks Charli, why is it so impossibly difficult to believe the nice things people say?! 🙂 really really appreciate that comment ❤
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That is so great to hear, congratulations. My motto as well, never give up, keep going, one day… oh, yes, one day 😀 smiles
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Thanks Gigi, its a great motto 😀
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Even it is hard sometimes. And a tear is dropping down, but I stick to it. Just have to 😀
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You’ve been a writer before! – But hey. This is so amazing news! Awesome! Congratulations!
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Hehe thank you so much 😊😊
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Made me tear up 🙂
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Gosh really? Well that although I feel bad, is lovely to hear 😊😊 thank you
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Congratulations! 🙂
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Thanks so much
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You’re welcome! Have a great week. 🙂
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Congratulations Sacha! That’s awesome 🙂 and you are definitely a writer xx
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Hehe thanks Helen 😊💖
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WOOOOOHOOOOO congratulations x
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Congratulations – makes it all worthwhile, doesn’t it!
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Thank you Marina 😊😊
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Congratulations! Great story, too. I love writing super shorts like that–such a great challenge. (Pfft! Of course you’re a writer. Don’t even.) 😉
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Hehe thanks Sarah 😊💖 lol good, but why is it so hard to accept?
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I don’t know. It took me a long time. Too long. And still… Sometimes…
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Congratulations! That is fantastic!
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Thanks Elizabeth 😊💖
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Aw, I loved your reaction. Absolutely how I’d react! Congratulations!! 🙂
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Thanks Ellie 🙂 I literally bounced around it was so funny. My wife was like ‘WHAT? WHAT ? WHAT?’ haha.
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“TELL ME WHAT’S HAPPENEDDDDDD” 😀
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pahahahaha yeah in a really angry voice!! lol proper rained on my parade!
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I can almost hear her!!
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Many congratulations Sacha. What great news and what a great piece of Flash Fiction. I hope that feeling you got when you read that email stays with you for a very long time. Enjoy the limelight and carry on with those story winners. It’s when things like this happen to us that we usually get a huge boost of confidence and are taken to the that next level of our writing.
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Thanks Hugh. I have to say – I am still riding the high. I laminated the email I got sent saying I had won – is that sad? I have stuck it on my bookshelf so it’s the first thing I see every morning to help drive me on!
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I’d have done exactly the same thing. I need to start entering writing competitions first though 🙂
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Sacha, you don’t need to be a ‘published author’ to call yourself a writer. 🙂 You’re bonafide!
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hehe, thanks Debbie. It is an interesting concept though – I know a few people who struggle to accept that they are a writer. I suppose it comes down to the separation between being a professional writer, and your definition of writer. Or I suppose ones internal concept of writer, is it merely the act of writing that makes you a writer? the quantity? quality? habit? Interesting thought anyway! 🙂
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Congratulations! I hope you are still smiling though I’ve come to this late. You are definitely a writer! 🙂
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